CHEESE
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Post by CHEESE on Apr 25, 2006 21:30:10 GMT -5
everything is exactly right when i walk around here drunk every night with an open container from 7-11 in st. ides heaven i’ve been out haunting the neighborhood and everybody can see i’m no good when i’m walking out between parked cars with my head full of stars high on amphetamines the moon is a lightbulb breaking it’ll go around with anyone but it won’t come down for anyone you think you know what brings me down that i want those things you could never allow you see me smiling you think it’s a frown turned upside down cos everyone is a f'ing pro and they all got answers from trouble they’ve known and they all got to say what you should and shouldn’t do though they don’t have a clue high on amphetamines the moon is a lightbulb breaking it’ll go around with anyone but it won’t come down for anyone and i won’t come down for anyone
RIP Elliott Smith
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Post by King Awesome Dawg! on Apr 26, 2006 7:37:39 GMT -5
That rap starts out pretty good and talk about being drunk on 40s! But then it get all looser and full of nonsince and dont even ryime! So trust me you will never get any where with that wrapping! Keep the first part and get rid of the rest of it and make it riyme mmore and put in some talk about being a badass and getting with the hos and shooting you gun and having lots of bling! Then it might not suck so much! Wow unreal I just told you how to take you looser garbidge rap and make it into a big hit that will probaly get you all rich! Unreal I am so nice! So you OWE me lots of money if you song gets all famouse cripes I wrote most of it and fixed it all up!
You OWE me!!! Your wellcome!
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Post by syk on Apr 29, 2006 16:48:44 GMT -5
I'm still stunned Guns N Roses is actually finally putting out a new album and Slash might join them on tour since Velvet Revolver is broken up and Slash needs a group to play with
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CHEESE
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Post by CHEESE on May 1, 2006 12:46:58 GMT -5
Who Cares! NOONE!
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Post by King Awesome Dawg! on May 2, 2006 7:29:00 GMT -5
Ya thats right no one cares about stupit Guns Rose! This topec is about rapping and my awesome rap! Which rulz!
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Post by syk on May 4, 2006 16:41:07 GMT -5
Rappers and their posses are going down like c*ckroaches lately. You ever hear of this chump T.I. whose homey got smoked yesterday???
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